Some notes from Rob Napier’s copywriting class on 8th March 2010
When he writes a sales letter he keeps Writing until he runs out of benefits!
The format of the letter, email, autoresponder etc usually has a structure :
Headline
Subheadline
Content
More subheads
Credibility in the form of make a claim - offer proof. Make a claim - offer proof. Etc
Have a close & call to action. Always have an OFFER.
Points to remember when writing about the BENEFITS of something.
It needs to SELL what the product/service can do - rather than what the purchases actually gets.
E.g. a drill is a machine that converts electrical power into physical torque and transmits it through a drill bit.
But the purchaser is bying HOLES.
More specifically, he is buying EASY-TO-MAKE-HOLES so that the BENEFIT is that he can put up a shelf easily!!!
To this end, you need to sell on emotion but back the logic of the sale with FACTS.
The “Bar Stool test”
Make your conversation as if you were sat next to someone in a pub. Don’t change the language simply
because you are trying to sell.
Some of the finer points about font/style/readability etc…
For legibility, when using PRINT, you need a serif script(i.e. with the curly bits), such as Times New Roman.
When your content is appearing on the WEB, you need sans-Serif, such as Verdana or Arial.
This is due to the resolution of the screen making the “frilly” bits hard to read online.
Wherever possible, stick to black on white and use as large a font as you can without ruining style.
Try and contain only ONE idea per sentence.
Make the letter come from you(singular) and speak to the person as if you were having
a normal conversation. Use the words “You” and “Your” more than “Me” or “Mine” because
people want to know what’s in it for THEM.
You can checkout the readability of a (MS Word) document by going into tools/options/spelling & grammar
So you have something to work towards, I’m told you should aim for :
Maintaining about 15 words per sentence, grade level 8 and a reading ease of over 60
Cheers for now,
Mike Knight http://www.mklink.co.uk Working from Home Tips